Sarai, You did a very good job clearly defining the sides and how they differed due to the Nazi lies and what the ghetto's were actually like. I also like how you made sure to specify that the poem didn't actually say it was in a Ghetto, making the mood of the writer and the reason for the poem more evident. Great blog.
Sarai, I loved your butterfly! I thought that you had one of most creative ones. My favorite part of your butterfly is the little hands. Those are my favorite because it shows a piece of the poem through a 3D object. I think that is really cool. In your explanations I thought you did really good! You explained everything really well and I could see what you were talking about through them. My favorite explanation is the one about the imagery and the cars. This one is my favorite because you used a direct quote and explained your reasoning on painting these cars. Overall, you have a great project!
Sarai, you had a REALLY good butterfly! The poem you had just by itself was very powerful and I think you gave it justice through your project. With that, your butterfly interpretations were very creative. I really liked how you made the hand prints to symbolize "For soft hands to shield the eyes." I thought that was rather creative, along with the eyes and bandaid you put. While you did a great job at showing things on your butterfly (especially the dawn! And the cars!), you also did a great job at your explanations. After reading them, I was able to fully understand the symbolism and interpretations of your butterfly. Great job!
Sarai, I believe that you should've switched the two tones of the butterfly. The poem spoke of the Night as something with a positive connotation, yet you put the blood and the bandages at night. I also believe that you should have made daytime something horrifying, "For all the horrors stared by day." But other than that, it looks beautiful, really. I was able to completely tell the amount of work that you put into this butterfly. Really easy and simple to understand, good job.
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Sarai,
ReplyDeleteYou did a very good job clearly defining the sides and how they differed due to the Nazi lies and what the ghetto's were actually like. I also like how you made sure to specify that the poem didn't actually say it was in a Ghetto, making the mood of the writer and the reason for the poem more evident. Great blog.
Sarai,
ReplyDeleteI loved your butterfly! I thought that you had one of most creative ones. My favorite part of your butterfly is the little hands. Those are my favorite because it shows a piece of the poem through a 3D object. I think that is really cool. In your explanations I thought you did really good! You explained everything really well and I could see what you were talking about through them. My favorite explanation is the one about the imagery and the cars. This one is my favorite because you used a direct quote and explained your reasoning on painting these cars. Overall, you have a great project!
Sarai, you had a REALLY good butterfly! The poem you had just by itself was very powerful and I think you gave it justice through your project. With that, your butterfly interpretations were very creative. I really liked how you made the hand prints to symbolize "For soft hands to shield the eyes." I thought that was rather creative, along with the eyes and bandaid you put. While you did a great job at showing things on your butterfly (especially the dawn! And the cars!), you also did a great job at your explanations. After reading them, I was able to fully understand the symbolism and interpretations of your butterfly. Great job!
ReplyDeleteSarai,
ReplyDeleteI believe that you should've switched the two tones of the butterfly. The poem spoke of the Night as something with a positive connotation, yet you put the blood and the bandages at night. I also believe that you should have made daytime something horrifying, "For all the horrors stared by day." But other than that, it looks beautiful, really. I was able to completely tell the amount of work that you put into this butterfly. Really easy and simple to understand, good job.